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InsaneSimon
03-29-2008, 10:40 AM
To be honest this is my second blog. I'm not a big fun of blog most of all because I haven't time but one friend of mine (offline friend) was looking for work and I hired him. I started this blog in about 60 minutes. Nothing special. Just a free template.
URL is http://www.teenhornyboys.com
I hope he's writing good posts :whip:
Gaystoryman
03-29-2008, 11:22 AM
To be honest this is my second blog. I'm not a big fun of blog most of all because I haven't time but one friend of mine (offline friend) was looking for work and I hired him. I started this blog in about 60 minutes. Nothing special. Just a free template.
URL is http://www.teenhornyboys.com
I hope he's writing good posts :whip:
Nice looking theme, looks nice actually, but uh, the one post, it is obvious English not a first language, which can be a turn off. The second post, regarding the Blake Mason image, is the copy from them, no changes to it.
Just something to take into account.
I'd also recommend keeping the posts in one category and not multiple ones, unless you are using the 'noindex, no follow' tags.
InsaneSimon
03-29-2008, 11:30 AM
Nice looking theme, looks nice actually, but uh, the one post, it is obvious English not a first language, which can be a turn off. The second post, regarding the Blake Mason image, is the copy from them, no changes to it.
Just something to take into account.
I'd also recommend keeping the posts in one category and not multiple ones, unless you are using the 'noindex, no follow' tags.
Yes, he studies English at university but it's not his first language :D
Do you think that the second post is better? lol because it's not a copy from them. I wrote it looking the pictures. To be honest I don't watch the promo contents sent by BlakeMason :D I take it as a compliment, thank you! :D
Gaystoryman
03-29-2008, 11:32 AM
Yes, he studies English at university but it's not his first language :D
Do you think that the second post is better? lol because it's not a copy from them. I wrote it looking the pictures. To be honest I don't watch the promo contents sent by BlakeMason :D I take it as a compliment, thank you! :D
Yes, the second has better grammar to it, so if you wrote it, sounds like you are twin to Lloyd then..
InsaneSimon
03-29-2008, 11:34 AM
Yes, the second has better grammar to it, so if you wrote it, sounds like you are twin to Lloyd then..
lol yes! And that's why I said "thank you" :D Probably I have to write by myself the next posts :D
marcjacob
04-02-2008, 02:35 PM
I think youve added posts since this discussion but yeah, the Blake Mason post is way better English. I cant believe youve made that theme work so well. I downloaded it and it just looked rubbish but it looks cool with the banners in place.